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Last week, Iris turned the corner to find that Matty had already opened the palace’s forbidden door. This jumps forward a little bit.
Iris remembered sitting on Matty’s bed that afternoon. He knelt at her feet with his hands behind her knees and gazed up at her with his pale green eyes. His lips, like rose petals on his fair skin, turned up at one corner. He pleaded, “Have faith in me.”
She had meant to stop him, to save him from himself. Instead, she lead the police agents right to him.
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Oh, he sounds so sweet! And she fed him to the dogs! Can’t wait to see where this goes! Great 6!
…and now there are police agents involved? The plot, as they say, thickens. Great six!
Very intriguing six…can’t wait to see where this is going.
Love the description!
I have no idea what’s happening, but I sure as hell want to find out! They sound wonderful, Wendy.
There’s enough guilt for a lifetime. Well done six, Wendy. Thanks so much for the mention.
How terribly sad!
Oh you are wrenching the heart strings here. Poor kids.
Wonderful writing, Wendy. You amaze me every week.
Police agents AND a forbidden door in a castle?
That poor woman! Is she going after him?
“Like rose petals on fair skin”. Very nice.
The intriguing details just don’t stop coming at us – nicely done! Terrific excerpt!
Oh, this is intriguing. Great six!
I love this six, I wish I’d been reading all along. Glad I came back to six Sunday!
Absolutely beautiful description with a great hook at the end!